Chapter 6: No return

[Kauria]

"And I should do what?" I asked, spreading my hands and realizing just how little I had done to help out, even on the Croatoan.

[Nohiki]

"Controlling the guns, watching sensors, EVAs if you're feeling adventurous, cooking food, cleaning the toilets, ..." I started giving out a list, "Don't worry, if work is what you desire, there will always be something." I said with a hint of sarcasm in my tone. Then slwly and causally, a wind appeared and clouds started to gather in the skies above. "Change of plans, we're leaving NOW!" I shouted and hurried inside, raising the shields and spooling the engines. "Tal, get your jet and meet us up." I radioed, checking if everyone was onboard. When that was done, the doors slammed shut and we launched, heading to the safety outside the nasty planet.

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Discussion: 1st person

So, anyone else liked it or jsut me?

[Midnightmoon]

I found it a bit easier to figure out how Lee would react and how he feals. I think the system works here in Croatoan because each charqcter has their own problems even as working as a whole, but i (personally) wouldn't want to use in in DE.

[Nohiki]

For me the biggest problem with using it in DE would be multiple characters controlled by one player. Two characters are fine, with one as a POV and the other in 3rd person, but even that requires color differentiation to make more sense