Meressä

[Elladragongirl]

Element:
Water
History:
Had peaceful life underwater until war came under the ocean, father killed mother and sister, tried to kill her but she fled with Blaze and the others
Appearance:
Scales the color of the ocean at sunset: a deep to light metallic blue, like those of water snake, fins replicating seaweed, sapphire-like eyes, teardrop-shaped scar on her right hand
Name:
Meressä
Age:
14
Gender:
Female
Other:
Can control water expertly although very young, fastest swimmer of her age, can turn invisible underwater
Behavior:
Like the ocean: sometimes calm, but at other times as furious as the stormy sea, loyal friend, brave fighter

[Inti]

Um, the history should be more specific. Before I can accept your dragon, you should edit the history.

[Elladragongirl]

how exactly does the history need to be edited?
and is the rest ok?

[Inti]

The history should be expanded, for example where she was born, how her parents died, how she got here (if she was foreign), stuff like that. And yes, the rest is OK.

[Elladragongirl]

ok
History:
She was born underwater, her first breath was of water rather than air. She is a tomboy, and preferred to swim with the boys of the village rather than the girls. when the war came to the village, she fought alongside the boys, until she heard that her father had slayed her mother and sister, and was searching for her. She fled along with a small group of other dragons into a forest, where she met Blaze.

is this alright?

[Inti]

Um... Lemme think about it in the morning. I'll be able to then.

[Inti]

About meeting Blaze... Did you actually meet him and talk to him and stuff like that, or is she just part of the group?

[Elladragongirl]

She's just part of the group, but wants to get to know Blaze better.

[Elladragongirl]

is this ok?

[Inti]

Yeah, I'd say it's in. If Wil accepts it, no matter what it's in.

[Wil]

It's in, like Itni said.

[Elladragongirl]

I'm going to put in something for Eloyn, too.
Name: Eloyn (duh)
Age: About the same as Meressa, 13-14
History: Was abandoned at birth by her parents, the king and queen, because they wanted a boy to take care of the kingdom, so she was thrown into river but didn't drown, instead she floated by Meressa's village and Meressa's mother saved her. She grew up with Meressa and the other water dragons. Only Meressa's father rejected her, and started a fight with Meressa's mother to get rid of her. She refused, and in his anger Meressa's father killed her and Meressa's brother, Storm. He went out looking for Meressa and Eloyn, who had escaped. However, only Meressa ran away with her sister's egg. Eloyn was captured by Meressa's father's forces, and brought to the castle. Meressa eventually met up with Eloyn again (See in the wild for more info).
Appearance: www.quizilla.com/user_images/E/EL/ELE/element907/1139980832_08Warrior2.jpg like this except with lighter colored hair.